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Here is my newset picutre ~sorry about the colours the stupid scanner seemed to fade them they look better for real~, i like how it came out, my only real issue is the background ~i hate backgrounds~ and here hands, god why are hands so hard. All comments and crits welcome Character and art belongs to me jemma catt Done in letraset promarkers, tria and copic and white gel pen Comments
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Very nice picture, that is fantastic. In love AgloAros  Very nice. Perhaps if the tones and shadows were built up some more, it would look even better.
 The hands still need work especially her right one. Still, it's quite good. Aww, very romantic illustration. The background blends well with the rest of the image, so well done.
My only contructive thought is that since this is essentially based around the lineart, it would be nice to see some variation in line widths - you know, with slightly thicker lines were shadowed parts may be, and thinner lines in more delicate places such as the decorations or hair. All in all I can see you put a lot of effort and detail in this. I tend to get sloppy towards the end, and I can't see that here at all!  thank you very much for your kind words
 -- For me.....the world.....consits of people o love. If those people are not here, It's as if my world doesn't exist. Hey Aniviel thank you for your kind works
i will keep in mind your constructive thoughts next time i do a picture, its always nice to know what i could prehaps do better-- For me.....the world.....consits of people o love. If those people are not here, It's as if my world doesn't exist. Thank you for you kinda words
you know the annoying thing with this picture is that it doesn't show up the darker tones i did build them up more but when i scanned it is came out really light -i might try to scan it again- yes i hate hands i tried so many times that i eve had to re-draw it out again because i kept rubbing out-- For me.....the world.....consits of people o love. If those people are not here, It's as if my world doesn't exist.  Beautiful! I love the concept! The expression and the detail!
-- the cake is a lie. you know it is.   This woman really has an aura
 I like that. Colors are nice too. Here are the parts you should focus on: *You should study hands. Do not only study muscles, but bones too. They look a bit weird in glove. You should draw the hand first than cover them with gloves to avoid mistakes (same goes for body - cloth) *Wrists and neck are too thick for a woman. Especially for an elegant lady like her Don't forget, wrists are never thicker than hand. (unless the figure isn't a fat person or a baby) Look at the wrist at the left of the picture (her right wrist) it's as thick is hand. Maybe thicker.. *While playing flute people block the holes with the tip of their fingers. I hope I could be of help |
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Going onto some elements of the painting that I think need improvement. I think you should pay close attention to facial anatomy and hand anatomy. I think her ears should be slightly lowered. They seem just a bit too high. Anime/manga wise, the rest of the face seems fine. The girl's thumb facing us seems just a bit distorted and slightly too much in the centre of the hand than on the side. The flute is slightly slanted as well, but nothing that detracts too much from the painting.
In the end, I think this is a great drawing. I like the cleanness of the linework and the smoothness of the colours. Fantastic work, and I hope this was of some help to you.
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